Imperius [Relentless Warrior Full Concept] by Phoenix86

Interesting Concept, I like the idea of nemesis and Might Charge, however, all the other abilities are very bland and seem like other hero abilities. Holy Fire is Azmo's All Shall Burn, and Shooting Star, well, we already have teleports with Li and Zeratul. Solarion is too much like El'druin's might and is insanely weak compared to Last Man Standing. Invunreble with 25% damage, movement, and attack speed for 10 seconds? Waaaaay too good.

So here are some idea's i have for the abilities

Mighty Charge - Love this spell, however i feel like the non-heroic damage should be greatly increased so he has a bit of wave-clear, maybe from 55 to 125?

Holy Fire - Odd spell for a warrior, don't want to be channeling for 3 seconds in the middle of combat while moving slowly. Instead, i would make it that you target an enemy hero, and it tethers to them, so that it does the same stuff, but you can also move and still AA and all that good stuff

Shooting Star - Interesting idea for this actually, how about instead of teleporing and damage, you instead choose a target to tele to and it blinds enemies near the target for say, 2 seconds? And some small damage like 80ish? Also if you change it to that, change the name too to something like...Blinding Light? Heaven's Glare?

Solarion - Too much like El'Druin's, and low damage, would change to this: Call down Solarion, the Spear of Valor, at the target location, dealing 376 damage and slowing nearby enemies heroes for 25%. Solarion stays in it's location for 3 seconds. Cooldown should be fine.

Last Man Standing - Much too overpowered, i would completly change the ability actually, something like this: Archangel of Valor - Enter a state of pure Valor for 4 seconds, during this time you cannot fall below 25% health, and your damage is increased by 25%. With this change, both ultimants are viable, and Last man Standing (Archangel of valor) still keeps it invunerable without being too OP.

So that's all of my suggestions on the talents, sorry it's such a wall of text lol, just wanted to help you with this concept. Some great idea's, just some tweaks need to be made to really give the hero his own identity. If you would like me to add my suggestions to talents as well, let me know :).