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Quest:Hitting enemy heroes 20 times with Bloody Cleave increases it damage by 5.Reward:Bloody Cleave radius increased by 15% and damage increased by an additional 20.Quest:Hitting 5 unique heroes with Frenzy.Reward:Duration increased by 5 seconds and Nazgrim gains 25% bonus Attack Speed.HeroesFire is the place to find the perfect build guide to take your game to the next level. Learn how to play a new hero, or fine tune your favorite HotS hero’s build and strategy.
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D- Giving stats to allies would be too strong. I suggested giving stats to nazgrim himself based on allies nearby because thats a way to tune nazgrim specifically. Its harder to tune that when his strength is giving allies major bonuses, and even at 5% health, damage, and 5 armor would be insane value.
Q- Now i understand, i was thinking some sort of ranged abilitiy but its basically a melee cleave type move, just with some "range" on it, thats cool
W- pretty good now, even though 10% seems rather low. If he would be tuned around hitting bounty targets it would be higher but his base stats would be lower to compensate. otherwise it wouldnt feel like you are actually getting a damage bonus.
E- pretty good still, but just for wordings consistentcy, armor and spell armor are on in the same. Armor implies both spell armor and phsyical armor, so no need to add both types.
R1- the new ability is pretty good. I think for simplifying however, you could make it read something like "gain up to X amount of movement speed and armor to yourself and nearby allies. The effect increases the lower the health of an ally. last x seconds" where at lower health you gain more armor and movement speed. Not sure about attack speed since thats similiar to rehgars bloodlust just with armor instead of leech. Movement speed + armor would be a hell of an engagement tool though
R2- still not sold on it but i like the direction you are going with it. Something that benefits at different thresholds is neat, so CC at high hp, bonus damage at low without the CC. that could be fun. (and id prob make it lower cd, since a 160 second cd ult wouldnt be very fun to play with.)
All in all its much better from where it started, take an upvote.
and finally . WHERE DID YOU MAKE THAT PICTURE FORREAL THOUGH? its really dope.
Q is worded super poorly i dont know if its a boomarang like falstad or reverse skillshot like xul
E is at least different but its basically a worse version of zuljins passive.
R1 Is literally water elemental from jaina
R2 is also different at least but a 65% "execute" that does octograb levels of CC + an instant pryoblast damage to the face?
This design is literally parts and pieces of other heroes sewn together except for execute with is so insanely overtuned it would have to have a 300 second cooldown
D- gaining 5% health for nearby friendly minions doesnt seem fun. Its almost like butchers old trait but worse because its your own minions so you cant really control it. (and his old trait sucked bigtime in terms of fun). The first part of it seems ok, but it seems more like a specialist thing. Like a split pusher. I think there are other ways you can capture the loktar ogar feel of a blazing savage frontline orc warrior being in the frontline. You could make it so you gain +stats when you are near enemy heroes instead of minions, so it makes your team fighting better for example.
Q im still not sure based on wording. are you saying an arc like zuljins twin blades? Even so it seems odd that an assassin (orc warrior no less) whose designed to be in the thick of things fighting for the glory of battle has a poke ability.
W- so the idea is much better but thats really weak for a basic ability. For example, lunara can do that at level 1 with poisons and on multiple heroes. A suggestion would be to let it also increase your damage vs said target and/or reduce damage taken from the target. Then you could also make it so it resets if the target dies so you just dive in fights bouty one guy, kill him, bounty enough, kill him, etc etc
E- i dont really see how it fits with the rest of the kit because the trait kinda already does that except its not health based threshold. You could make this the ultimiate instead of dire orc since nazgrim never actually become a dire orc (IE keep dire orc, but change the name to beserking)
R1- see E, i think its a OK ult, but nazgrim never became a dire orc. Before WoD came out the only 2 known dire orcs was malkorok in SoO, and gutrogg bloodboil in BT (w.e the spelling of his name was)
R2 the main issue i have with this is counterplay. Just dropping below 65% is basically a death sentence even if its on a long cooldown its not fun for the recipent. Its basically, welp im below 65% hp, time to hearth or randomly get one shotted by nazgrim. And just raising the cooldown doesnt feel fun to the user. Typically big long cds like that turn fights on a dime or do something crazily insane to the tempo of the game, Mosh Pit, Lava Wave, Devouring Maw, etc etc. All this does is kill a guy because he wasnt topped off. It would be obnoxious in QM but also kinda bad in ranked play because people dont sit below 60% as often and if they do its more than likely an isolated target who would die anyway.
TLDR
D-Idea is good, maybe change it up slightly to fit assassin rather than specialist
Q-Still not sure how it would work, but poke damage doesnt seem to fit the beserkring orc archtype
W-Solid start, but expand on it to do more
E-probally fits better as a lowish cd ult, make new E to expand on the warrior theme. Maybe some sort of healing? Mobiltiy? idk
R1- See E, nazgrim has never been a dire orc
R2- Id redesign completely