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Quote | PM | +Rep by GtheK » December 9, 2015 3:51am | Report
Hi! I've been using this site since the beta and I noticed there weren't any good Cho'Gall guides, especially for Gall. He's a pretty simple hero, so I felt comfortable making a guide for him. It'd be awesome if some of you guys/gals could give a look over and let me know what you think I can improve, or give it an upvote if you like it. Thanks!

http://www.heroesfire.com/hots/guide/co-op-kings-gall-now-with-math-8078

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Quote | PM | +Rep by Halfie » February 18, 2016 6:10pm | Report
I think your explanations for each talent was very well done but each paragraph was a bit hard to read. Consider spacing out your paragraph into sentences or using headers for each talent. The threats are pretty simply done, I think you could elaborate why Jaina is squishy to Gall because I think talented Jaina players can kite Gall (but I may be mistaken).

edit: I forgot to commend you on the math. I know that takes more time to add and its always useful.

Overall, You give some great advice and I think people would enjoy success in QM with your guide.
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