Basically removing her trait and making her into a shitty assassin wouldnt fix her.

Feedback welcomed, feeling this one so i might actually do talents for him

Her basic attack baseline is kinda crap at 85 and a a 1.25 attack speed which makes using her E almost a chore?? unless you need the movement speed which isnt warranted to be a basic ability on its own when heroes like maltheal get a 25% movement speed on nearly the same cd that also removes hit collison at level 1 as a talent. 20% additional AA speed doesnt fix that either. It should be a dynamic bonus based on the amount of targets you consume the DoT rather than being static which would...

Sorry but honestly i cant imagine just being a tail hanging down on screen airborne like a mutalisk. And i cant immerse myself thinking deathwing would be temporarily stunned or "killed" by damaging his tail. This is the guy who had molten hot magma metal plates literally drilled his body and just went raw on the pain because his body was literally falling apart from the power he had. Its so metal and bad ass and then its like well ouch my tail got hurt i gotta rest this one off...

Ive been working on an andariel concept myself for a LONG time as an anti spell user, but i couldnt really nail down everything i wanted so i havent published it yet. I like seeing yours to give me some inspiration possibly to finish it. Off the bat, things i really like Q- Simple but it has room to game. Simplying it to say something like removes any positive armor would be more clearer if thats what you are going for rather than 10 armor which is a odd number rather than just temp...

ok so heres my feedback about abilities. since the thing is still down im assuming this is an assassin concept since every ability you have deals damage. First off, you need a theme. A clear and distinct difference that seperates your hero from another. Right off the bat from reading the trait it screams to me alexstrasza but weaker. Go into dragon, empower abilities. Maybe make her either always in dragon form and balance from that, or make it so she doesnt use dragon at all like chromie....

Ignoring the rest of the kit, first and foremost, why would we want to play as a tail? Visually thats really stupid. Its like making us play as sons of ragnaros instead of ragnaros himself.

You put more time and effort into the shit like "skins" and quotes than you did with the actual concept. Nothing is cohesive and its just generic boring abilities on top of that. Her trait is almost exactly the same as alexstrazsa but worse. Both ults basically do the exactly same thing as the rest of her basic abilities which can be summed up as "do aoe damage in front of you." Final notes are nitpicking, but why would she be on a positive note with ragnaros when...

Basically you just want straight up buffs on every single ability she has. Not much of a rework and the buffs are poorly thought out and are pointless.

The trait is the only interesting part of his kit, and its not very practical. Not to mention that its naturally weaker on 2 lane maps , its completely gone once fountains are destroyed. And then its just impractical, lane sustain is important and this trait straight up removes that. If anything its more detrimental to use it than to just get healing because the chances you have time turn around, drink, reengage, your enemy has either walked away, see you buffed up and proceeds to walk away,...