So i decide to keep the nightmare elixir ability and remove the thirst for vengeance ability since it fits he character better

Nice abilities and talents. Keep up the good work.

I have added a few quotes for her. I will try to think more.

Thank you for your response mate. I changed the relentless to what you suggested about the black mamba poison. The reason why i used MULE and promote and is because it might not suit an assasin but it suits Vanessa. She is the leader of a brothehood/clan. She takes care of them and protects them a.k.a MULE. Also she inspires them with her leadership and skills a.k.a promote. I think the addition of these two talents i combine both the assassin aspect of Vanessa and Vanessa herself

Also what do you think about the talents?

Thanks for the feedback Masterjojojo. I think i will increase the damage of sinister strike and use only one charge and she wont leap on her target. Thanks for the feedback Siperos: I will wait for more feedback about the thirst for vengeance heroic ability before i do any changes but in the meantime i will try to think of a poison themed heroic ability :). In the begining i was going for a Edwin hero make but i wanted to use poisons and then i remembered the thinkg you said about she she...