Whenever you kill a hero, three soul fragments burst from their body, landing randomly on the ground nearby. When you walk over a soul fragment, you absorb it and restore 4% of your maximum health and 2% of your maximum mana. This is really weak. 12% max health restore after killing a hero isn't good trait at all. Maybe change it to "Dealing damage to a hero with less than 20%(?) of their maximum health drops a soul fragment" or something like that. 20 armor for 8 seconds that...

Every icon is just a white square for some reason.

1.5% of 2946 is 44,2 health per second...it's still too much, this shouldn't be higher than 20. Muradin is crying in corner. And 4.5% of 2946 is 132.6 health per second...it doesn't feel right. The problem that it's not just "good", it's "too good". Stitches has alot of Health and Regen because everything else in his Kit isn't that good. And Mannoroth has nothing bad.

Better would be if it increased health regen for few seconds after taking damage. Because right now he is unkillable. Or reduce it from 2.5% to 0.5%, and decrease maximum additional regen for each hero nearby from 4% to 2%?

D)Blood of Mannoroth Mannoroth health regeneration permanently is increased by 2.5% of his maximum health, this bonus health act every 1 second. For every ally which is in a 3-yards from Mannoroth or for every enemy hero attack him, this reg amount is increased by additional 0.4% up to 4%. So, at lvl 1 he heals for 75.9+6.27 health each second and even more for each hero around? Stitches is crying. He needs 49 stacks of E quest at lvl 1 to reach that healing. This is absurd. E)Cripple...

4? Um, you mean 0.4, right? Because Deathwing is 1.25. Oh okay then.

I like this concept, but i have something to say. 1. How big is that glacier? I mean Hitbox radius. 2. W, E, R1 and R2 icons are already ingame. Yep, tha's kinda bad. 3. Icicle crash is kinda too strong. Maybe I misunderstood, but isn't that just Sonya's Arreat Crater that also stuns?

"And about Hammer of Justice, maybe you have some issues with this ability that must solve it, anyway I am ok with it" I have some issue with your ability, because it's ranged stun. Or does it works like Raynor's Q, i mean it's skillshot or is it target? What i meant that Asymmetic Axe's effect doesn't feels like heroic ability. You just increase your damage by 50%. Varian's increases his attack speed, movement speed, reduces heroic strike's CD and also reduces his attack damage.

Q)Rend -6% max Health in 2 seconds from an ability with 12 sec CD is too much. Better make it "-1.5% max Health every second for 4 seconds". W)Gut's Fist There is no need to write "increase target damage taken", you can just type "reduces the Armor", so basically: Deals 215 to a target, Slows it by 20% for 1.75 and reduces their Armor by 10 for 3 seconds. See? Ability is not changed, but the amount of words is reduced. E)Mocking Blow There is a...

He would be a great Announcer