Just a little tipper, Eden : The zergling requires HERO takedowns to get an attack speed and movement speed boost (And I am assuming he won't be doing a ton of damage on his own), while the butcher gets attack damage from 25%, unupgraded, to 35%, upgraded, just by farming minions. I actually feel lowering the trait's buff would make the zergling a hero that wouldn't even be close to being as viable as even low tier heroes, as he will need heavy buffs to escape (I am all assuming here he will...

I like the Pixelune skin, although it would require quite a bit of rework, and therefore be quite costly on its own. The concept is really good, although some people may argue some abilities are boring or too mainstream/too alike to everyone else's abilities. Her damage though, is very. VERY. VERY low. Kharazim (a support) has double her attack speed and double her attack damage. I know she isn't dps focused, but upping her damage would be a bit of a must, if you ask me. I mean, right...

I suppose it's your right to say my concept is bad. Oh well. I still am taker for extra critic and suggestions.

Mmmh. Maybe giving out what the vulnerability is? (It would probably be something like 10% damage from everyone and everything, but varian gets a 25% INSTEAD.) I like the tweaks to it, although 20% movement speed for 6 seconds? Maybe 10% for 3-4? Note that i'm only giving out suggestions here -- your concept, your choices. You may have forgot to add something that will make it all balanced/actually UP, or I may just not be seeing it play out right in a match, who knows?

"After a .5 second delay a bone prison entraps all nearby enemy heroes for 2 seconds and deals damage while hero is trapped within it's grasps." All NEARBY enemy heroes. I am assuming this guy is gonna be waiting in the back line -- which will basically mean he won't be in the middle of the fight, therefore, not "nearby" enemy heroes. Although I do understand -- As of right now, I'd class him as a specialist, unless you plan to give him secondary abilities allowing...

Stats are coming -- Although I'd say that Gidwin will be tankier than Olaf from the lost vikings, but Tarenar, albeit being tankier than Erik, will have lower hp than Baleog. As far as damage goes, I'll refer to the unupgraded damage of Baleog at lvl 20 (which is 159), so Tarenar will probably have a little more than that (thinking somewhere in the 175 damage range) and Gidwin will have a little less than this (thinking maybe 140, 145)

I specified that they only pick ONE heroic for the both of them -- Making one of them more powerful than the other. Also, I mentioned that this is a WIP, constructive criticism is appreciated. Stats WILL be tweaked, and quite heavily. They also SHARE a talent tree, meaning that you can't upgrade the both of them every tier. Also, they will be much weaker than a normal hero on their own. That given too, the one you're not controlling will behave as a bot, and cannot use some...

Good concepts like this make me think Blizzard really should take some ideas from this concept list. Nice job! A few things ; -Vengeful eye is NOT good enough. 15% extra damage toa hero for 2 seconds every 5 seconds, and to a single hero? Tyrande's trait does it better, so maybe buffing it to 25%? Maybe even going to 35%? Remember that the hero ONLY takes extra damage from Varian, So you're giving yourself a less good Tyrande's trait to one hero that only affects your damage. Or a...

I imagined the mage being a human, the priest being a bald dwarf and the hunter being a night elf that goes into a belf as hordie skin. I really, REALLY like the concept though. Wish I had the idea first.

I was wondering if you would make the 10% damage bonus per heal globe cap at 100% for stabzz? Because at that rate, I'd be farming globes for the whole game and end up with a 500% damage bonus for stabbzz... rogues are op....