Global Range, 5 seconds unstoppable sounds really ~broken~ strong unless it has like... 100-120 second cooldown.

I think the rest of his kit fits well together, cooperating to be a zone control while he gets an 8.5 range basic attacks. He kinda fills similar role to hammer but he can move, has better zoning for less sustained damage, slightly more bursty. I think R1 being a channeled skill is crafty as it gives him durability at the exchange of zoning. R2 however is just straight up damage with little risk on his side. Unlimited range considering summons can chase and can go over terrain with their...

1st heroic can have a shorter less confusing description if you mention that it's a channeled ability instead of stating that it is interrupted by various specific CC debuffs. The 2nd heroic looks like a lot of visual clutter. 4 summoned units with bouncing attacks which I assume would be red Taldarim energies would result to a very messy screen.

Thanks

how did you make the spoiler command?

works all the time.

Yeah but the specific ability isn't. it has a lot of unfun elements to it since you basically are unable to play the game for 4 seconds because of a fight that is happening far across the map. That was the critique I received.

Time Stop is not good. I also have a concept of Vorazun which basically has the same skill and it is criticized for being a Zeratul ult but just global.

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No Mana Talents? I feel like the existence of the Mana Talents were good for the newbie players. Maybe not the best competitively but they definitely helped me a lot when I was still un-aware of Mana Management. Conjurer's + Peach Perfect worked really well as well when reaching level 20 with Kung Fu Hustle. I feel like that build would help newbie players while also giving her a niche Unlimited Mana Build Late game. Just a little something for the players she was designed to cater to.