Well, you are the one who is the worst at checking your mistakes. As I am the worst to check mine!

"Binding Shot: Alleria's first basic attack after Leaping Shot snares her target for 1 second." Leaping Draw was it, I assume? Apart from that' I'd love to play her - done better than mine :-P Gave a plus vote already!

I like this one, however hearthstone heroes are world of warcraft heroes, so your dream about hearthstone heroes never will come true. Also, almost everything is nice, however I noticed one combo with his abilities: Blessings of the Sun (Buff) Increases the Basic Attack Damage of yourself or an ally by 50% for 4 seconds. Effect and Duration are increased by 400% on Minions and your Summons. and also gives them +150% Health. Mana Cost: 65. Cooldown: 12. PLUS Staff of Origination...

Pretty nice concept is there, however there are things that should be changed. Sorry, but nothing is truly perfect and there are always people that will dislike something. So, let's go: *Specify your hero's statistics (especially range). If you don't know, how much your hero should have, you may use scaling from 1 to 10 or describe in words (low, high, massive, poor, mediocre). *Add talents. Talents are part of a hero and they describe them more than abilities, in example the thing that...

I like the concept, I'm awaiting for the next part. Sadly, nothing is purely perfect and you have to change some things: First of all, you need to implement talents to your hero. No hero can exist without talents, so it's like you made half the character. Secondly, damage dealt by her abilities is just too low. Compare it with damage dealt by Johanna (she deals not much damage at all, yet her abilities deal about three times that much damage). Of course you can say "She isn't damage...

It would be lovely to see a pig in action xD And not sarcastic, I like this one, making him attack nearby ally for a shield, but I'm afratid that if both courage and fear don't have duration, this could be too strong. Also, I think, that Battle Shout should consume these stacks. And one more thing - don't you think the cooldowns are too long for what the abilities do? Curse doesn't seem for me to be such strong to have 30 seconds cooldown, not telling about the shield. Tassadar shields for...

Good there are going to be even more people who know, how to make a nice hero concept. However, I would like you to add something here that would make this one unique in any one way, some unseen mechanics, unseen crowd-control or any other unique element, as most of your abilities are owned by other Hots heroes - Disintegrate-Diablo's Lightning Breath, Archon-Archon, Wave of Force-Facemelt, Arcane Orb-Baneling, with only Energy Twister being "brand new". So, I wish you good luck and...

This concept is pretty nice! However there are things that should be changed (naturally for me should be changed): The first one: Mak'Gora ability is way too powerfull for justa basic ability - 5 seconds taunt is just too much. It could be heroic with reduced duration, sth around 3,5~4 seconds. Riht now I thick it could have 120 seconds cooldown instead of 20 seconds. The second one: The Shattered Time just doesn't suit him for me - maybe try to add him heroic that will make him sort of...

No problem, if with my help your heroes will be as famous as furynator's or kid-karma's, so let it be. Waiting for rework. :P

Everything is nice, but I'm afraid he's left with no damage. As I checked his talents, I saw some allowing to do damage, but there should be something already in his kit, like Malfurion has Moonfire, Li Li has Serpent and Rehgar has Lightning Shield and trait. The rest seems to be pretty nice.