The concept is not bad at all, however your Tirion's skillset doesn't suit Specialist (There's only one talent that would suit Specialist to be honest). The most suiting role for him would be support, however we do have one supportive paladin (check: Uther). Also, it looks like you gave talents totally randomly, giving for example Regeneration Master at level fourth. This one must be level 1 to allow stacking from the beginning. Also Bolt of the Storm on level 16. You should check talents of...

Thanks for comment, as developers might be "blind" about their creations, and that happens pretty often. I've changed some things to prevent him from an unstoppable provider of advantage :P However, people pay attention mainly at the Brand New Mechanostriders. How about hte other things, like Devices or other abilities? Are they good and suit Hots theme? Are at least some of them unique? I would like to know :)

This happens when you think about role and abilities not simulatenously (if there's such a word). I also had the same problem when making him here, however I tried to make talents more defensive (lastly, it turned into a warrior not as tanky as Chen/Johanna but with some damage, like Tyrael/Sonya) Check my Lei Shen and let's fuse our Thunder Kings! xD http://www.heroesfire.com/hots/concept/lei-shen-1215

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Hey, this concept looks great, however the numbers you gave there are broken. Imagine: Around 100 DPS on level 1 with deadly poison/constant 40% atk spd and move spd debuff/75% healing reduction. I know she has to strike, or even strike three times, but really, this is way too much (Imagine level 30 and 960 damage per second with trait, about 80% of Falstad's Hinterland Blast) Kick deals too much damage (at least for me) Venom Slash deals more damage than Archangel's Wrath (yet Venom Slash...

The concept is fine, however Independing Doom is too weak (remember, that typical team-fight lasts around 10 seconds or even less, it depends), Arcane Barrage has too small damage growth (for me) and Barrage of Magic has no damage growth (probably you just forgot to add it). Also, if I remember good, Arcane Blast was stacking mana cost growth, so you should move this one from Arcane Explosion there. Also, if Independing Doom's range would be global, it also could add this uniqueness to your...

As I remember, he hadn't any abilities in WC3. About the concept: It doesn't seem to be bad. The Exception is Mastery of the Elements that reduces cooldown by 5,5 seconds. In order for this talent to be balanced, the Lightning Bolt's damage should be similar to basic attack's damage (probably a bit bigger, but not too much), making this ability weak then not taking this talent. So there you should invent something different or rework this one. I hope I helped :)

First of all: there are two Mantras of Retribution (check the second and the fourth). Auras are mostly overpowered (compare to other similar abilities if possible) Breath of Heaven probably restores too much health (it's like a heal that can restore 33% health to half your team) and makes very strong auras even stronger (Imagine 4% health per second or an additional 53 damage per second at level 1, not saying about 60% attack-damage reflect). You should give him a basic ability that would...

No, the Hour of Twilight doesn't seem to be OP, it's 10% damage amplify component is not as strong and at level 10th and greater towers don't do as much (in exception of the Core). I wonder, why you gave him a specialist role? For me it looks more like a support (both heroics are supportive for me , all spells in light form and Lesser Light in Shadow Form). However I like the concept of switching from Dark to Light Side.

Concept mainly seems to be good, however the first heroic is for me much stronger than the second one and I think you gave him too much health (other thing if it would be Warrior, this way he would have too much damage). Some words about talents: Battle Momentum was always available at level 7, so you should give it also as a tier 3 talent. Imposing Pressence was always decreasing attack speed by 50%, so you should also consider this. Lich Blade seems to be overpowered, when fighting...