Nothing about this feels like Gul'Dan. It's all just general Warlock abilities -- nothing about this feels like the Betrayer of the Orcs. Gul'Dan is a very intelligent schemer and planner who works everything to his advantage, thinks three steps ahead, and despite looking as obviously evil as anyone has ever looked still managed to smooth-talk the Iron Horde into accepting his masters. None of these abilities feel intelligent or calculating or like they reward you for finesse or planning.

The stacking debuff is a great way to get across that "relentless killer" feel. I think he needs a snare (without talenting) to really be effective; Crushing Shadow should probably get a slow attached to it, since one of your three basic abilities being devoted only to adding more "get more damage to your other basic abilities" is pretty uninteresting, and locks him into HAVING to pick one of the snare talents. Shadow of Death is also a neat concept, but the way it's...

A stealth Hero that works by misidrection and deception rather than concealement is an interesting idea. Unfortunately, it doesn't seem like Belial has a lot to DO with it. Since lane minions work in such predictable ways, you can't really hide as a lane minion -- the moment you DO anything, you're revealed to anyone looking. And since he can erupt out of a lane minion anyway, why bother hiding as one? And when he gets somewhere... he kills minions. He has a cone AOE which kills minions, a...

This guy's kit seems to be all over the place. He repels enemy melee heroes... except none of his abilities have any knockback without talents? He has an ability that hurts enemies for attacking him, but he's already a ranged character and he doesn't have any ability to dive into the enemy team (and making that ability "Bayonet" makes no sense at all), so there's no reason for others to attack him. His assist skill is an untargeted one that goes toward the lowest health ally, which...

First off, this writeup is full of grammar and spelling errors. Second, the color scheme is trying to kill my eyes. Third... I think it fundamentally fails because it acts as though Wilfred Fizzlebang is the character we care about. We don't. We're all here for Jaraxxus, Eredar Lord of the Burning Legion; Wilfred should be a mobile Jaraxxus delivery mechanism in a way that's more fundamental than just one ultimate to summon him.

Six different racers with six different "weapon" abilities is just way way way too complicated, not to mention the fact it'd make voicing them impossible. The "race fans" concept is an interesting way to reward them for moving, but I think it's too disconnected from what you "normally" do in the course of a game.

I like him! Well, I hate him, Garrosh is an awful person and an awful character in the story. But I like the game character concept! :-p I love the idea of a warrior who mode-swaps by throwing away his weapon because he gets SO DAMN ANGRY HE MUST USE HIS FISTS.

I like the idea of pushing the "Ghost as saboteur" to contrast with the "Ghost as assassin". Aside from the specific number tweaking, I don't see why he needs Consume -- maybe as a secondary ability he can get with a talent, but having 1/3rd of his basic abilities taken up with the thing that gives him mana for other basic abilities isn't that exciting.

So... his trait rewards him for being at low health, but the only way he has to shield himself is one of his ultimates? I don't like that very much.