Was so confused about him having 2 abilities until I read your note and then it all made sense. Brilliant honestly.

Copy and paste all the text you used in your videos and paste them into the template that heroesfire gives you. Not hard.

Ugh make him unique by giving him a second ult please. Tracer is the only overwatch hero with only one ult and that's what makes her unique You got my hopes up with his interesting trait you gave him, but only one ult is super weak

yessssssssssssssss I like this

Please stop with the video concepts only. At least fill out the rest so I can simply read the concept. I would love to offer feedback and thoughts but all your stuff are videos and nothing else. You say you find writing time consuming and tedious "I find writing to require an exorbitant amount of time", yet you have written all of the details in the video. Why can you not simply copy and paste the text from your video into the heroesfire templates that they give you. Like it...

I see you've changed the trait. I still think this isn't a good trait because increasing mana costs has no counter play. You have to not be near him and be within a certain threshold and that kind of mechanic isn't fair or fun. There's a reason we don't have any heroes that increase cooldowns or mana costs of their enemies. It prevents a hero from playing how they were intended to be played, without actually providing a direct counter to it. Plus there are a good amount of heroes that...

Please give him a second ult and don't use ammo. Those are the exact same mechanics as tracer and no other overwatch hero since tracer has had this. They've all had 1 new ult added on top of their existing one, and they all use Mana (except for DVA and Zarya) and DVA has her Overwatch ultimate as her E, and two brand new ULTS. Get creative man!

What weak ults. Seriously, nothing about this reads as a tank aside from his trait. Hero has only been out for a little over a month and you're already suggesting a complete ability rework, which is not what reworks are. They take current abilities and tweak them, only replacing them if they are absolutely necessary, and they don't replace basic abilities. Also your second ult man, why on earth would you choose that over the damaging ult. Mounting up will not stop you from crowd control...

I like this concept. However I think it's a bit overpowered. The trait shouldn't take over every minion, as that is too strong. It would make more sense to do like, the first 3 minions within range, instead of all. Also, the E you gave him feels more like an ULT than an ability. I would perhaps change it to just give the enemy a bit of Damage over time. Stick a shadowy reflection to the targeted enemy hero and have mirror the damage that hero does to an enemy by 50%, have it last for...

I had a similar concept a while back! Actually it's pretty damn similar to yours. https://scontent-ort2-1.xx.fbcdn.net/v/t1.0-9/11251384_10156266977610173_6168641873776922198_n.jpg?oh=3cfbb6bbab4b2bfb6f549e0a274f3422&oe=5931315C